I think it’s great! And kudos to you for sharing it here. I’ve got bits and pieces of a novel that I don’t quite have the guts to share just yet. I’ll live vicariously thru yours in the meantime:)
"This is a slow-burn lgbtq romance"...is this why he killed his dad? SO good. The line stating how quickly he took his dad's life stands out for the fragility in such a hard scene is a great contrast.
I love this idea : having a playlist made for each character and then one for the overall novel. What an interesting way to get into each character's head or create their heads to get into to begin with...
I think it’s great! And kudos to you for sharing it here. I’ve got bits and pieces of a novel that I don’t quite have the guts to share just yet. I’ll live vicariously thru yours in the meantime:)
"This is a slow-burn lgbtq romance"...is this why he killed his dad? SO good. The line stating how quickly he took his dad's life stands out for the fragility in such a hard scene is a great contrast.
Oh my gosh — Thanks, Julie! I will say, that is not why his dad was killed 👀
Wow very evocative! So dense with Americana. I'd definitely read the book.
Thank you, Annie!🤍🤍
This is really good. I’d definitely be interested in reading the book when it’s done.
That means the absolute WORLD to me. Thank you!
I love this idea : having a playlist made for each character and then one for the overall novel. What an interesting way to get into each character's head or create their heads to get into to begin with...
Wow. And this: "How easy life used to be when God was above me, he’d thought." Chilling. Thanks for sharing this!